After piles of work, I had finally reached winter break. It is also my first day of hagwon. My eyes opened suddenly this morning. I washed my filthy body, and consumed enormous amount of nutrition. After I stuffed my bag, I ran out to catch a bus. I waited and waited; however, the bus didn’t come. I got my phone and contacted my friend, and he told me that there was no hagwon bus today since it was Saturday. So I went to the bus stop, and waited for the city bus to come. Again, I waited and waited but the bus didn’t come. I became desperate. To relieve myself, I went to a convenient store to get a sushi. As soon as I was about to buy the sushi, the bus passed by. I became frustrated. I ran back to the bus stop and waited once more. The bus finally came and I longed for hagwon. Finally, I hopped off on the city hall. I strutted toward my hagwon. I took an elevator and swooshed up. As I entered the classroom, I said hi to my friends. Then we played for five minutes and started taking a test. We took the horrible test for four hours. After we finished, we ate lunch together. And finally, we fled to PC bang and had so much fun.
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fantastic! I think the original structure of this story is very well made. Some of the imagery was greatly exaggerated but it was good in overall
ReplyDeleteI could see you have included many exaggerating vocabulary into the original copy, and it works well.
ReplyDeleteI like your adjectives because they create images in my head. The Story sounds very realistic. ^^
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